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Another WIP - I need help :c

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I started this around November last year - DEAR GOD I WANT TO FINISH THIS.

I think part of the reason I'm so stuck is that I have no idea how to do the background. She's meant to be standing on a balcony overlooking a crowd who is watching the races.

(She's going to be a fun character - sunburnt and drunk but always well dressed. I'm allowed to make fun of these sorts d: )

Please help? I'd love you forever (more than I already do).
If I had a subscription I'd do that whole "request critiques thing"...

Her dress will not stay that colour 0_o

OH! And her name is Ollau and she's also a lupe on neopets 8)
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You can make the fingers holding her goblet smaller if you think it looks better. If you want her overlooking the crowd, I'd have her up higher or the crowd lower. (I'd go with lowering the crowd--you have more sky, less of them, and the crowd doesn't have to be as detailed. ;))